"Fire Fingers" start up

As I said on my last post, I'm starting this post to find out if you followers like this story paragraph to see if I should start writing more on here. Please remember, DON'T STEAL THE IDEA!!! So, I present a paragraph from my starter book writing, "Fire Fingers".   Ashten looked around the school for any indication of someone who could tell her where her locker, dorm and classrooms are. As she walked by and tried to asked those questions, the only think she got was her saying only a small portion of her questions and other students brushing by like she didn't even exist. Then she was bumped.   Ashten was forced back by to uniformed girls, one with her long, brown hair in pigtails and one with her brown hair down to her shoulder blades. "Sorry, about that", the pigtailed one apoligized. "Ya, we didn't mean to", then she stopped and said, "your Ashten Readington, right?" "Yes", she said softly,"why?" "We're your roommates, I'm Veronica and my BFF here is Wysteria", the girl with her hair down explained,"We can show the dorm if you liked". "Yes!"she said rapitly.    As the girls walked down the hall, Wysteria and Veronica ask," So,what your gift?"  "Gift?"  "Ya, this school is for kids with powers like mind readering and the ability to fly. So, what's your?" Ashten had no idea of what she just got into.  Like it? Comment! Hunteress